Posted 29 May 2008 02:58 PM Hide Post
This story is about a gurl who moved and started talking to this guy wen she was 15 but he messed her head up so when she ended she ran away to another state but her old lyfe styles haunts...

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chelicia-spec why wuld u put me through this is u knew u was gonna leave me not her??[i said pacing the floor]

spec-bay,i jus...

chelicia-bay,bay.. dont fuckin bay me jus explain yourself n get tha hell out!!!bay...wat da hell u should of told me this from jump. i hate u i fuckin hate u..

spec-chelicia im sorry look i love u but...idk i jus fucked up bad & i dont wanna hurt u.[spec said sitt'n on the bed with his head in his hands]

che-look[i grabed his hand]i quess u gon do u regardless .with me or without me.i love u but i understand.i knew from da jump u had a gurl i just cant believe i thought u wuld leave her for me.it was my own fault and i forgive u.keep doing u playa.maybe we can keep in touch[i said walking him to the door]good bye!!

spec-not forever[i closed the door and he left i slide down the door crying.realizing i just graduated i ran upstairs called my mom told her i was driving to maryland to get my best friend me,her,dominique, and,raven were going to cali.

chelicia-and thats why i left[i said to my shrink angela also a highschool friend]cus i knew we were no longer friends........
should i keep going lemme kno plz

This message has been edited. Last edited by: laShae`,

I`m not trying to be mean or rude but i think you should take down this post , edit your writing , && then repost it because it`s too clustered && kind of confusing. Check your spelling also. Shrink is the word not Shrienk. Also , spell your words out like this not lyke dis.

This story is about a gurl who moved and started talking to this guy wen she was 15 but he messed her head up so when she ended she ran away to another state but her old lyfe styles haunts...

SNEAKPEAKz
chelicia-spec y wuld u put me through this is u knew u was gunna leave me not her??[i said pacing the floor]

spec-bay,i jus...

chelicia-bay,bay.. dont fuckin bay me jus explain urself n get tha hell out!!!bay...wat da hell u shulda told me this from jump. i hate u i eff'N hate u..

spec-chelicia im sorry luk i love u but...idk i jus fucked up bad n i dont wanna hurt u.[spec said sitt'n on the bed with his head in his hands]

che-luk[i grabed his hand]i quess u gon do u regardless .with me or without me.i love u but i understand.i knew from da jump u had a gurl i just cant believe i thought u wuld leave her for me.it was my own fault and i forgive u.keep doinu playa.maybe we can keep in touch[i said walking him to the door]gub bye!!

spec-not forever[i closed the door and he left i slide down the door crying.realizing i just graduated i ran upstairs called my mom told her i was driving to maryland to get my best friend and me,her,dominique, and,raven were going to cali.

chelicia-and thats y i left[i said to my shrienk angela also a highschool friend]cus i knew we were no longer friends........
should i keep going lemme kno plz

somethin like that, n bold da stuff like this:

spec-chelicia im sorry luk i love u but...idk i jus fucked up bad n i dont wanna hurt u.[spec said sitt'n on the bed with his head in his hands]

thanks gurl i was working on but you got

but no ones telling me if they like it

yea its good, just do like she said, write wohle words no shorthands, buh its good, drama is wat get bumps, sex also lol

you need sum cast i could be in this storii but you need to tell how and why she left spec or watever

[recap]
spec-not forever[i closed the door and he left i slide down the door crying.realizing i just graduated i ran upstairs called my mom told her i was driving to maryland to get my best friend me,her,dominique, and,raven were going to cali.

chelicia-and thats why i left[i said to my shrink angela also a highschool friend]cus i knew we were no longer friends........

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angela-have you ever thought of going back

chelicia-NO!!!!of course not{i said jumping up} ithink i should be leaving.we still on for lunch this weekand???

angela-yes we are see you next week..

i got inside my car and blasted the plies cd.i was on my way home when i seen my current boyfriend kissing all over a girl i just called him and told him we were over & kept about my day,like i didnt have any feelings.it's beenlike dat since i left spectacular smith.anyways i either cheated,didn't let them in or they cheated on me. i dont even kno why i had a boyfriend .they were there for amusement. i arrived home to see my best friend dymond & our neighboors dominique & raven cooking dinner.


honey im homei said setting down things i bought for the house]

dymond-mamma called said she had some news & someone else called he didnt leave his name though just his number.

chelicia-o.k thanks ima get in the shower and get ready for job number two.but i'll eat with yall[ i said heading upstairs for the shower]


i got dressed aye and left for work. i walked in magic's the fantasy job dancing it was high class nop stripping just lap danceing in lingere.i only worked there once a month.HERE women were in control no n**** could runover you then.i made a G in one night.
you'll never get noticed here because you wear a mask over you eyes.inthe day i was a pediatricain[sp] after work i went home said good night to dymond and took a shower wheni gotout i called my mom.


ring...ring....ring

chelicia- hey ma

c/m-hey che how are you doing??

chelicia- i good jus working

c/m- i heard dat hows everything going??

che-good mamma i broke up with charles today.

c/m-really i thought he was different wat did this one do??

che-ma you make me sound like a whore i havent fucked any of them..there just my boyfriends and he cheated on me

c/m-well im sorry i jus... i knewyou wasnt a whore its just...[she said studdering]

che- well sinceyou wanna know i only fucked spec my first. my last. my forever. my never.[i said getting mad]

c/m- speaking of spec he stops by the house all the time,he siad he misses you n to call him. his number hasnt changed. i even gave him your number. you know him and dat lil gurlfriend of his broke up a while back but you werent here.look honey you cant blame him for talking to you when he had a gurl friend. i mean you knew about and you didnt think it would get that far. so what you love him try n work it out.

che- good night mommy[with that i hung up]

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i watched the teacher,glanceing at the clock wishing class would end. i looked around class,who looked bored or was knocked out sleeping.as soon as i raised my hand to leave class the bell rung. it was time for lunch.on my way walking tomy locker i bumped into 2 cute guys.

guy 1-hey maybe she want someone to pull her hair[he grabbed my hair gently as i brushed passed him

che-no i don't[i said laughing]

guy 1-hey

che-hey[ i kept walking in front ofthem]

guy 2- wat grade is she in??

guy 1-idk ask her she standing rite in front of us.ay wat grade you in?

che-tenth

i then woke up wishing i never meet him spectacular,the boy that drove me to california today .im orginally from here but my step dad decided he wanted to move us to his home town.i didnt really know alot of people but he was my best friend.we were attracted to one another but he had a gurl friend and after 6months of us hanging out n him being my boy we kissed.it wasnt on purpose but that was the best kiss of my life.we still hung out but i tryed to slow down with him cus my feelings were growing stronger. one night he came over myhouse to chill but i was home sick like shit.we watched movies messed around and he massaged my feet.sooner he was dancing for me to take you down by chris brown .

flashback*

che-your a mess

spec-your turn

che- o.k[i said getting up danicing for him]

i turned around to face him and he pulled meionto a kiss a better one than the first time weboth forgot all about his gurlfriend.

spec-[layed me on my back kissing my neck,stomach and lips.he put his finger inside me]ive always liked you che but i mean i know how your are bout me having a gurl but i love you

che-stop plz

spec-if you wanted me to stop you would move my hands move my hand[he said fingering me harder]

che-spec ima virgin and i dont wanna get hurt plz you kno wat your doing and you makeing me feel rite dont do this to me.

spec-[kissed my neck then my lips for about 5mins]i wont hurt you i love you[he said soflty in my ear]

che- i love you

spec-dont worry i got it[with that spec stripped me naked kissing every part on my body.he took off his clothes next. then he got up to turn off the light but i was still kinda light outside so we could still see each other he got a condom and told me to put it on him]

che-[put the condom on him]go slow

spec[entered her he was working his way in he looked at chelicia face and it look like she was about to cry ]do you want me to stop

che-no keep going[after about 5mins i started moaning for him to go faster he did as told soon after that we both came i went and cleaned myself up and he went after me i felt bad i just lost my v-card to my best friend who has a gurl that ive never seen but still.i hated that he had a gurl i wanted to be me.so after that we couldnt call it a friendship we just fucked]

spec-[came outta of the bathroom]you liked it??

che-yep.did you??

spec-yea i loved it..[he said smiling]

che-so wat do we do now??

spec-wat eva you want we can be friends but we tryed that and it never worked or we can i mean damm..... wen you get a boy friend your gonna cheat on him you did it on purpose[he said joking]

che- we'll just be freinds & no im not[B][but dat shit didnt work.we were always kissing and he always ate dinner wit us my mamma always like him before.sooon after that we did it again and again he still had a gurlfreind i got tired of it and then he just stop talking to me after 1 year six months of friends and the other six of lovers .i knew he was gonna dump me for her so after we had our talk i packed up and left.i fell in love with him and he broke my heart.]

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che-thats y we broke up or wat eva now im having dreams about him hopefully not for long. i got up and did my hygeine thing made me and dymond breakfast and chilled.dymond was with her boyfriend all day. i was kinda jealous cus she had her shit together.i quess afta being spec's FRIEND for a year i screwed up.i do miss him though maybe mom was right he couldve changed maybe i should call him. i ran to the picked it up and dailed his number.no matter how hard i tryed to forget it i knew it by heart.itrang and i was nervous it felt like our first convo. in highschool or wen i was 16 and we did it for the first time.my nervousness soon left when a gurl picked up the phone........
what do you think chelicia gonna say??
is she gonna get back with spec??

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