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Ok now i wont officially be posting until thursday but i will post a little 2day im trying 2 make it quicker so that yall dont have 2 wait but dance practice and skool is really killn me rite now but i will add cast as i go so if you wanna b in it let me kno!
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Wuz up errbodi im not a new writer i had a story on here b4 but i cancled it anyway this is my new stori called My Secret 2 How I Fell In Love With My Enemy.....Itz a bout a girl named Dayshawnna she 17 and she has 2 feternal twin sisters Deona and Brieanna...Dayshawnna has diz boii dat she cant stand dey hate eachotha well at least thats what she thinks but what she doesnt kno is that he is really in love with her...when thay finally start gettin into a good realationship a girl named Simone comes and messes it all up.............................. Cast call!

Dayshawnna aka Shawnna or Day Day-17/Tremaine aka Trey- 19
Deona aka NaNa- 17/DeAndre aka D or Dre-18
Brieanna aka Brie-17/Blu-18
Quivadise aka Orreo-19/Spec-20
Brooklyn-18/Marcus-20
Lyricz-17/Dustin-17
Dominique aka Nique-18/Myles-17
Shara-18/Bobby-19
Al-21/Krishonda aka Shonda -19
TreNai-18/ Corey-19
Trent-17/Tina-17
Kryssie(mom)/Clifford(moms boiifriend)
Kristieena-19/ Malique-19

Druex
-20
Lite-17
Cornell (dad)

**EMEMIES**
Monica-18
Simone-17

7:30am
(Dayshawnnas phone rings energy)
(song) I wish i cudd rip out a page of my memories cuz i put 2 much energy in him and me...
Dayshawnna: (sleep) Hello
M/v: Hey babii
Dayshawnna: Who diz?
M/v: Trey
Dayshawnna: O hey why you calln me so early
Trey: Cuz you pose 2 b at skool
Dayshawnna: O s**t I 4got
Trey: I had a feelin you did
Dayshawnna: Yea well i c you when I get 2 skool
Trey: Iight..I Love you
Dayshawnna: Ok (click)
(she got up and put on this
shirt these jeans and these shoes)
Dayshawnna: Brie!....NaNa!...O H**L NAW I KNO DESE HEFFAS DIDNT LEAVE ME!
(she walkd out da house and got in her car and went 2 skool
Brieanna: HEY BOO!
Dayshawnna: Nope
Deona: HEY SIS!
Dayshawnna: Nope
Brieanna and Deona: Euuuh...somebodi aint in a good mood....wuz rong wit you
Dayshawnna: Now yall care about me... afta yall left me at da house and didnt even wake me up
Deona: Hey I tried
Dayshawnna: You kno I cant hear yo soft a*s voice while im sleep you shuda got Brie loud a*s 2 wake me up
Brieanna: You so rude! I am standn rite here
Dayshawnna: So! (laughs)
Brieanna: You so mean but I still love you!
Dayshawnna: Wateva
Brie: Oooo I got 2 tell you somethin come 2 da restroom wit me
(dey go and wen dey got in dere and dey heard somebodii moanin)
Deona: Uh un dey so nastii
Brieanna: YEA AND DEY NEED 2 GET A ROOM!!!
(den Trey walkd out da stall.........)
***** Hit up and let me kno how it iz ill try 2 post somemo 2marro*****

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IM ME AND NO BODII ELSE YA DIGG??!!

IM LOOKN OUT 4 ME, TKEN CARE OF MII NEEDZ, LIFE IZNT GARRENTEED..ITZ TIME 2 START LIVEN!!!

ITZ NUN WORSE
THAN CARIN ABOUT
HIM BUT
KNOWN HE DOESNT CARE ABOUT YOU

♥CAST CALL INFO♥
NAME: BRIA AKA STAR
MAN: BLU, PLEASURE, or MR.Y.B.T (yellaboy trent)
ROLE: BESTIE OR SIS
AGE: W/E FITZ
KIDS: 1 GURL JAZLYNNE BRYANNA-CRE`SHEAL
PERSONALITY: COOL, CRAZII, FUNNY,SARCASTIC, MEAN, SWEET WEN I WNNA B, LOVES 2 EAT, LIKEZ 2 HAVE FUN, LOVEZ 2 SHOP, OUT GOING, AND WILL FITE 4 MAN OR FAM YA DIGG.... : )
LOOK: AALIYAH OR KEYSHIA COLE
..........~~MRZ.NINI WUZ HERE~~ T3H3 : )
 
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HOW MUCH CAST U NEED??







I LIVE WHERE U VACATION
 
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lik 4 2 6 ppl


IM ME AND NO BODII ELSE YA DIGG??!!

IM LOOKN OUT 4 ME, TKEN CARE OF MII NEEDZ, LIFE IZNT GARRENTEED..ITZ TIME 2 START LIVEN!!!

ITZ NUN WORSE
THAN CARIN ABOUT
HIM BUT
KNOWN HE DOESNT CARE ABOUT YOU

♥CAST CALL INFO♥
NAME: BRIA AKA STAR
MAN: BLU, PLEASURE, or MR.Y.B.T (yellaboy trent)
ROLE: BESTIE OR SIS
AGE: W/E FITZ
KIDS: 1 GURL JAZLYNNE BRYANNA-CRE`SHEAL
PERSONALITY: COOL, CRAZII, FUNNY,SARCASTIC, MEAN, SWEET WEN I WNNA B, LOVES 2 EAT, LIKEZ 2 HAVE FUN, LOVEZ 2 SHOP, OUT GOING, AND WILL FITE 4 MAN OR FAM YA DIGG.... : )
LOOK: AALIYAH OR KEYSHIA COLE
..........~~MRZ.NINI WUZ HERE~~ T3H3 : )
 
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♥cAn ii b iiN iiT??♥


♥CaSt iiNfO!!♥
namε: Briεanna b.k.a Briε
agε:watvεa fitz
rolε: bεstfriεnd or sista
man: bluε or slick
pεrsonality: alwayz loud nd alot of fun. alwayz dεr 4 hεr friendz nd fam nd will kick a bitch ass bout hεr man
look likε: keyshia cole
racε: Dominican nd Black

★AiiM: FuNkYyPhReShH305★

ღ.soy una hεmbra mala!♥
ღ.la vida εs a corto para toda la miεrda εstúpida.♥
ღ.¡tome un paseo en mis zapatos entonces usted puede juzgarme!♥


♥Briiε wAzZ hεrε♥
 
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iight mami (no homo) i got you


IM ME AND NO BODII ELSE YA DIGG??!!

IM LOOKN OUT 4 ME, TKEN CARE OF MII NEEDZ, LIFE IZNT GARRENTEED..ITZ TIME 2 START LIVEN!!!

ITZ NUN WORSE
THAN CARIN ABOUT
HIM BUT
KNOWN HE DOESNT CARE ABOUT YOU

♥CAST CALL INFO♥
NAME: BRIA AKA STAR
MAN: BLU, PLEASURE, or MR.Y.B.T (yellaboy trent)
ROLE: BESTIE OR SIS
AGE: W/E FITZ
KIDS: 1 GURL JAZLYNNE BRYANNA-CRE`SHEAL
PERSONALITY: COOL, CRAZII, FUNNY,SARCASTIC, MEAN, SWEET WEN I WNNA B, LOVES 2 EAT, LIKEZ 2 HAVE FUN, LOVEZ 2 SHOP, OUT GOING, AND WILL FITE 4 MAN OR FAM YA DIGG.... : )
LOOK: AALIYAH OR KEYSHIA COLE
..........~~MRZ.NINI WUZ HERE~~ T3H3 : )
 
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can i be in it

name- quivadise aka orreo
age- w/e u like
man- spec
role- bestfriend
*any other info just ask*


 
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who u wanna look like ma? and what yo pesonality gone b like?


IM ME AND NO BODII ELSE YA DIGG??!!

IM LOOKN OUT 4 ME, TKEN CARE OF MII NEEDZ, LIFE IZNT GARRENTEED..ITZ TIME 2 START LIVEN!!!

ITZ NUN WORSE
THAN CARIN ABOUT
HIM BUT
KNOWN HE DOESNT CARE ABOUT YOU

♥CAST CALL INFO♥
NAME: BRIA AKA STAR
MAN: BLU, PLEASURE, or MR.Y.B.T (yellaboy trent)
ROLE: BESTIE OR SIS
AGE: W/E FITZ
KIDS: 1 GURL JAZLYNNE BRYANNA-CRE`SHEAL
PERSONALITY: COOL, CRAZII, FUNNY,SARCASTIC, MEAN, SWEET WEN I WNNA B, LOVES 2 EAT, LIKEZ 2 HAVE FUN, LOVEZ 2 SHOP, OUT GOING, AND WILL FITE 4 MAN OR FAM YA DIGG.... : )
LOOK: AALIYAH OR KEYSHIA COLE
..........~~MRZ.NINI WUZ HERE~~ T3H3 : )
 
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CAN I BE IN IT

NAME:BROOKLYN
AGE:18
MAN:PLEASURE OR TI
ROLE:BESTFRIEND
LOOK LIKE:RIHANNA
TANK U
PERSONALTY:COOL ASS GURL LAYED BACC BUT WILL FIGHT IF IN NEED SO
 
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A way to get people to read your story is to not tell them about the story.

You need to leave the readers wanting to know what's going to happen next.

If we already know whats going to happen by you telling us, what's the point in making a story?
 
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look like:



personality: dont really talk around people i dont know but talk 2 much with friends, real, will fight 4 friends and family crazy ass hell when with friends


 
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can i be in it?

Smiler Smiler


SiqTheme ; Nick Jonas..tha Hubby=♥



quote:


Nick: Lyricz . . .
Lyricz: yaahh . . .
Nick: you know when you said you were feelin freaky . . .
Lyricz: [qiqqles] yaahh . . .
Nick: well . . i'm feelin it too . . .
Lyricz: [qiqqlez] iz that sooo . . .
Nick: yaahh . . .
Lyricz: riqht . . .
Nick: && its noww..9:30pm. .
Lyricz: so whats's Nick qot in mind?
Nick: ummm nothin much, Jus a freak Niqht, thats all.
Lyricz: [qiqqles] so what you waitin for bitch.
Nick: [Laughs] My Hormones . . . && .. [looks down]
Lyricz: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHH
Nick: Shut up && qet me workinq huni.
Lyricz: [qiqqlez] ooo violent! -Nice!
Nick: [feels somethinq] Mann you qood at this.
Lyricz: HAHAHA, i know!
-----[LIGHTS DOWN]-----
. . Lyricz&&Nick . . .


iNick&&JoeJonas! . . . .♥

YIM: lyriczluvzhim
16th BiRTHDAY CUMiiN ...>> JANUARY 8th 2009
 
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♥♥can•i•be•in•it♥♥♥♥can•i•be•in•it♥♥♥♥can•i•be•in•it♥♥


♥Ca$t call inf0♥

♥name♥dominique
♥nickname♥nini or nique
♥personality♥kool•goofy•shy around new ppl
♥role♥bestfriend•sis
♥man♥ junii0r •sp3c •myl3z •tr3y s0ngz
♥luk lyk♥==> 0r 0r

 
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[New Part]
Dayshawnna: O H**L NAW
Trey: O s**t! baby...
Dayshawnna: Baby my a*s
Brieanna:Lo que joder se equivoca con usted (what the f**k is rong with you)
Deona: Mane 4real doe dat cold
(dey walkd out)
Nique: Wat up Shawnna, Brie and NaNa
All: Hey
Nique: Shawnna wuz rong......
Lyicz: O naw wuz rong wit my bestie...who a*s ima have 2 beat????????
Nique: Datz what im sayn
Brieanna: TREY!!!
Lyricz: O h**l naw what dat n***a do... you kno i alreadi dont like him
Brieanna: He wuz doin da nasti in da bathroom with Simone
Brooklyn: Wait don't she go with Slick?
Deona: Not no mo
Dayshawnna: Speakn of dat b**ch dere she go
(walkd ova 2 ha)
Dayshawnna: You real durrty.....
Simone: So itz not my fault dat u wuznt givin him what he needed
Lyricz: Hold on now you bout 2 get murkd dont b talkin 2 her like dat!
Brooklyn: Yo Simone.....
Simone: What!
Brooklyn: Ima keep it real wit you....I already dont like you so if you touch her it gone b yo life!

This message has been edited. Last edited by: ~%*M@m!! G0t @ Sw@99 L!k3 Wh0a*%~,


IM ME AND NO BODII ELSE YA DIGG??!!

IM LOOKN OUT 4 ME, TKEN CARE OF MII NEEDZ, LIFE IZNT GARRENTEED..ITZ TIME 2 START LIVEN!!!

ITZ NUN WORSE
THAN CARIN ABOUT
HIM BUT
KNOWN HE DOESNT CARE ABOUT YOU

♥CAST CALL INFO♥
NAME: BRIA AKA STAR
MAN: BLU, PLEASURE, or MR.Y.B.T (yellaboy trent)
ROLE: BESTIE OR SIS
AGE: W/E FITZ
KIDS: 1 GURL JAZLYNNE BRYANNA-CRE`SHEAL
PERSONALITY: COOL, CRAZII, FUNNY,SARCASTIC, MEAN, SWEET WEN I WNNA B, LOVES 2 EAT, LIKEZ 2 HAVE FUN, LOVEZ 2 SHOP, OUT GOING, AND WILL FITE 4 MAN OR FAM YA DIGG.... : )
LOOK: AALIYAH OR KEYSHIA COLE
..........~~MRZ.NINI WUZ HERE~~ T3H3 : )
 
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BUMPZZ 2 DA FULLEST GURL

*F*A*M*E GURLZ
Fuck ALL My Enemies =FAME ♥
 
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[New Part]
Simone: You aint gone do s**t
Brooklyn: I aint gone do what?.....let me get away 4rm her b4 i beat her down!
Brieanna: Day Day you straite?
(b4 she cud say anything she passed out)
All(except Simone): OMG!!! Shawnna!
Simone: Ha ha datz what she get!
Nique: B**ch shut up b4 you get like diz!
(dey took her 2 da hospital)
Orreo: Omg! bookie you starite?
Dayshawnna: I feel fine
Orreo: Ok thatz gud
Pleasure: You straite lil sis
Dayshawnna: Yea i think
Spec: You sho
Dayshawnna: Yea
Blu: Ok well let me kno if dat n***a do sum stupid cuz i got sum 4 him
Brieanna: Well i guess i can tell yall
Dayshawnna: Tell us what?
Deona: Youre pregnant
Dayshawnna: IM WHAT!!!! this cant b true
Brooklyn: Yea sweetie itz true
Dayshawnna: (starts 2 cry) Im not ready for a baby!
Lyricz: Well you got us
Dayshawnna: But still
Doctor:Ok she is free 2 go home but she needs alot of rest
All: Ok
(dey took her home)
Trey: Where you been?
Dayshawnna: Out
Trey: Out where?
Dayshawnna: Out dang
Trey: Get yo a*s ova here
Dayshawnna: What!
Trey: Give me a kiss
Dayshawnna: (kisses him) you happy
Trey: You gne leave me
Dayshawnna: Now baby what kind of question wuz that?
Trey: Juz answer it
Dayshawnna: (tounge kisses him) (starts 2 talk in a seductive voice)does that answer it
Trey: Um hum
Dayshwnna: (seductive voice) I hope so cuz datz all you gone get...get out
Trey: WHAT!
Dayshawnna: You heard me
Trey: (slapped her) I didnt want you anyway
Dayshawnna: (cryin) GUD!!!!
(he left and after she call her bestie Lyricz)
Lyricz: Hey boo you iight
Dayshawnna: I want an abortion!
*** ill add mmo 2marro ***
Bumpz plz

This message has been edited. Last edited by: ~%*M@m!! G0t @ Sw@99 L!k3 Wh0a*%~,


IM ME AND NO BODII ELSE YA DIGG??!!

IM LOOKN OUT 4 ME, TKEN CARE OF MII NEEDZ, LIFE IZNT GARRENTEED..ITZ TIME 2 START LIVEN!!!

ITZ NUN WORSE
THAN CARIN ABOUT
HIM BUT
KNOWN HE DOESNT CARE ABOUT YOU

♥CAST CALL INFO♥
NAME: BRIA AKA STAR
MAN: BLU, PLEASURE, or MR.Y.B.T (yellaboy trent)
ROLE: BESTIE OR SIS
AGE: W/E FITZ
KIDS: 1 GURL JAZLYNNE BRYANNA-CRE`SHEAL
PERSONALITY: COOL, CRAZII, FUNNY,SARCASTIC, MEAN, SWEET WEN I WNNA B, LOVES 2 EAT, LIKEZ 2 HAVE FUN, LOVEZ 2 SHOP, OUT GOING, AND WILL FITE 4 MAN OR FAM YA DIGG.... : )
LOOK: AALIYAH OR KEYSHIA COLE
..........~~MRZ.NINI WUZ HERE~~ T3H3 : )
 
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