Yea Yea I Dropped this lil piece in the Cypher, Im lookin for constructive feedback let me know if ya are feelin it

Im not as friendly as you think i am/
I dont always do the right thing///
but how can you tell i have no hands/
Im not as fly as you cause im missing my left wing//
I always sell myself short im so insecure/
walk around with my gun cocked live by my own rules/
Who the fuck are you dont tell me what to do/
Im the definition of A Fool/
You can find me in the hood wearing lupe's Old Jewels/
Im well educated never droped out of school//
cause that was the only way i was going to get my tools/
For fun i play Hide and Seek with my friends//
if i find you imma put a bullet in ya lens//
On the Weekends we go Hunting AkA Shoot down Plains/
We Have No Strains And Feel No Pain/
Not A Single negative Thought Runs Through My Veins/
this is Just The Enviroment that i grew up In/
At night i release my stress through my Violin/
and I Ask God to Grow My Left Wing/
So I Can Fly away from this animation that Im Living In/

Ohh yeah i never really introduced myself On here, My User name is Papo JR ya can Call Me "JR" Im From Miami, Fl my background is Dominican my myspace is www.myspace.com/adrianelbebo Hit Me Up