Originally posted by Sirius Selah:
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Originally posted by nIANja909:
lol... yeh I accidentally hit I in there but anyway...you mispelled "you" in "yedig"
But yeh. I like my use of "closet" better lol. And I dunno how a closet is an "inner home away from home"... I think you just added that to make it look like you have some kinda brains... so people will look at it and be like "wow I dunno what it means but it sounds deep...this guy is very smart" lol.
And I was kiddin btw... I am not trying to be an internet emcee, but if you are tryin to be serious with your "creative" lyrics... I suggest you dont quit your day job.
inner home away from home: a closet is located INside a house/apartment/etc. there fore it's INNER yet it's also seperate from the feeling of "home" because it doesn't provide comfort but instead storage. I am smart and I am deep. You won't hear me say it too many times because I don't have to. Also, lets be blunt once more . . . if I were truly serious about getting into the rap game. I wouldn't be wasting lines in a cypher when they could be reserved for a single. That's just common sense. I do what I like. I have songs that are "dumbed down" and others that are highly introspective . . . why? I do what I like. Now, what if I told you that Lu wrote the last response? You wouldn't believe me . . . why? because when you READ something that's better HEARD, it's like taking a shot in the dark at how it should be delivered . . . lets just have fun with what we do . . .
I don't think your lyrics are deep at all. In fact I find them goofy but that's you, and I'm sure you like/love what you drop. I haven't heard you spit them, therefore I can't call you lame until I have heard it. Now . . . can someone please drop some more bars?
