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LOL i havent even recorded a song yet. We can dream though.
However i was proud of this piece.
 
Posts: 990 | Location: South Carolina | Registered: 22 September 2006Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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Peep this, It's just something I thought up!!



I dont mean to brag
I don't wanna be rude/
But don't try to front on me, cuz i'm not that dude/
Stay strapped wit the rhymes, AK-47 lines/
Blow you up with the bombastic flow, set to blow like a mine/
Study the ones that came before, now i'm ready for battle/
Each rhyme I spit trigger's yo' brain and makes your cranium rattle/
God bless me with these rhymes, help me miss these haters/
Armed with a sword to cut, I'm Ryder the hater slayer/
Dont cut nobody down, I study my own devices/
I'll stick to my rhymes, and you stick to your own vices/
Now who's the nicest, well, for a fourteen yearold/
Blizzard verses with impact, I bring the sheer cold/
I'm told to be bold, watch the story unfold/
I'm a angel in the making, now watch me take shape from the mold/
And spread light through these raps,i'm ready to take flight/
Real hip-hop CAN'T be dead, trust me dude, it's alright! Big Grin

I call this one "Ryder is alright" HAHA, I think that's a cool name!! Cool


I will remain a soldier, ti'll the war is won!!!

Sono: I AM......
L.O.D UP!!!
My AIM: SONO DEF
 
Posts: 582 | Location: VA | Registered: 14 October 2006Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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Damn LF, i read the whole thing that joint is CRAZY. and RYDER stuff is dope to , i like ur wordplay. i might have to drope a little freestyle or something..


We cant choose the life that is given to us, but we can choose how to live the life we have been given.
 
Posts: 695 | Registered: 23 June 2006Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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i was listing to diamonds so i did freestyle about it.

An arm suffices as payment, for our/
rekless embelishment of diamond tennis braclets/
we cant see the/
faceless faces of the unfamous faces that face this/
unfortunate fortune formulated by fortuitios fate/
frightened by freedom forced to forego family for escape/
losing limbs for locating Jewels and gems/
gradually generate genicide/
generally blood diamonds and the drug trade coenside/
coincidently, even when concious/
about diamonds/
we continuously cause conflict/
contradicting our own beliefs/
causing children to comply with/
a life of misery and grief/
what type of shit are we on/
people are dying/
from Angola to Seirra Leon/
They dont want to be amputated/
for us to wear diamond braclets/
while praying to be exonerated/
their life has been abominated.


We cant choose the life that is given to us, but we can choose how to live the life we have been given.
 
Posts: 695 | Registered: 23 June 2006Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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That was dope C.R.I.S.I.S. I like your style.
 
Posts: 990 | Location: South Carolina | Registered: 22 September 2006Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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