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LOL i havent even recorded a song yet. We can dream though.
However i was proud of this piece. |
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Peep this, It's just something I thought up!!
I dont mean to brag I don't wanna be rude/ But don't try to front on me, cuz i'm not that dude/ Stay strapped wit the rhymes, AK-47 lines/ Blow you up with the bombastic flow, set to blow like a mine/ Study the ones that came before, now i'm ready for battle/ Each rhyme I spit trigger's yo' brain and makes your cranium rattle/ God bless me with these rhymes, help me miss these haters/ Armed with a sword to cut, I'm Ryder the hater slayer/ Dont cut nobody down, I study my own devices/ I'll stick to my rhymes, and you stick to your own vices/ Now who's the nicest, well, for a fourteen yearold/ Blizzard verses with impact, I bring the sheer cold/ I'm told to be bold, watch the story unfold/ I'm a angel in the making, now watch me take shape from the mold/ And spread light through these raps,i'm ready to take flight/ Real hip-hop CAN'T be dead, trust me dude, it's alright! I call this one "Ryder is alright" HAHA, I think that's a cool name!! I will remain a soldier, ti'll the war is won!!! Sono: I AM...... L.O.D UP!!! My AIM: SONO DEF |
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Damn LF, i read the whole thing that joint is CRAZY. and RYDER stuff is dope to , i like ur wordplay. i might have to drope a little freestyle or something..
We cant choose the life that is given to us, but we can choose how to live the life we have been given. |
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i was listing to diamonds so i did freestyle about it.
An arm suffices as payment, for our/ rekless embelishment of diamond tennis braclets/ we cant see the/ faceless faces of the unfamous faces that face this/ unfortunate fortune formulated by fortuitios fate/ frightened by freedom forced to forego family for escape/ losing limbs for locating Jewels and gems/ gradually generate genicide/ generally blood diamonds and the drug trade coenside/ coincidently, even when concious/ about diamonds/ we continuously cause conflict/ contradicting our own beliefs/ causing children to comply with/ a life of misery and grief/ what type of shit are we on/ people are dying/ from Angola to Seirra Leon/ They dont want to be amputated/ for us to wear diamond braclets/ while praying to be exonerated/ their life has been abominated. We cant choose the life that is given to us, but we can choose how to live the life we have been given. |
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That was dope C.R.I.S.I.S. I like your style.
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