Tell me what ya think constructive feedback only thank you

You niggas rap about money/
Me i dont rap i tell storys/
my story-line//
is so long is wrap around your mind//
but you cant see it cause you are blind//
listen with your ears not with your eyes/
your favorite rapper is the worst rapper alive/
and thats the truth these other rappers are telling lies/
open your eyes and realize/
the reason why we have so much crime//
is cause these rappers are puting the wrong image in these young peoples mind//
in school i was the dumb kid in the classroom/
now im the bright kid in the booth/
my lyrics so hot//
just pour gasoline on me and watch me glow in the dark//
niggas better upgrade your bars//
before you upgrade your cars//
cause your bars are gonna get you money to upgrade you cars//
but enough of that, that aint my style thats not what im about/
im about rasing the dow/
halla at my nigga jones if you got a dout/
im about integrity//
john gotti had it//
but he lot it//
keep looking for it//
you might find it//

you have a large zit or herpe below your lip, get that checked out ASAP