I write a lot tell me what you think


----------who am i-------
I'm generally quiet, required...some deep thinking,
I admire,
world wonders, I plunder I am a myan...
or maybe mike Tyson,
but no bcuz I'm light skinn....
or maybe I'm a re-in-carnation of frank lymen...
or maybe a commissioner, selling u some verison...
that black kid pushin and mafia ways tie in...
karate kid mister mewoge trained in Chilean...
who am I,
who sent I,
I'm lookin like the type who could
be carryin semi...
if my eyes slanted an automatical samurai...
a door man who mops floors and sanitize,
angry youth who spray paints and vandalize,
the one who observes the art up in disguise...
or maybe I'm a cloud who's apart of the sky
who am I?


-----the beast-----
remain fallen Angels, till rain of the
beast tames you,
stuck in his belly as food as fate named you,
humanity is sicknin, we are far from ascension,
trapped in the matrix, weak, no spoons bendin,
but burnin as the dope fiend keepin his spoon litten,
the teks-nine bent, off and brothers facin extention,
nah no secret...
Dna was part altered... to be scarface...
pray to the god father...
we was told that the worlds stuck in hot lava,
hell on earth fuck it...
I'll be a snake charma...
and act brolic, runnin round with fake armor,
wrekless in the head, dawg can't non- harm ya...
can't sleep sufferin insomnia...
the air all poison likea broken themomitor
if I stand up the world crooks will monitor,
the world like a fat bitch most of us is lost her...

u suck ass juice.

thats a bit harsh... butt crust will suffice.

to be honest. i cannot tell you if your rap is good or bad. i have to hear a rap with a beat to judge it. i cant read a rap and think its good. thats just me though.

haha... i didnt even read his stuff either. i just assumed its garbage

garbage is harsh... undigested waste will suffice.