She said, I'm all alone in this place
I wish that God was lookin out for me
And send me his grace.
I wish he could see my face
Erase the tears from my eyes.
Cuz all the times I cried
Inside I wish I had died.
We tried without protection
Learned my lesson no question.
Now I'm facin the neglection
Stressin every single second.
I've thought about every single method
Even thought about usin a weapon.
So when I pull it this bullet will end it
Hope God can prevent it
Then I heard...

Intruder [x4]
Alert [x4]

He said, I don't have friends anymore.
I wish things would go back to normal
I was happy before.
But now I'm feelin so poor
Ignore the good things in life.
Cry myself to sleep at night
I might just give up the fight.
Despite the dreams I invisioned
My nightmares keep me imprisoned
Now I'm steadily wishin
Livin with the pain I been given.
Erase my name with this mission
When they see me hang from the kitchen
Will they realize somethin was missin
If not I hope God is listenin
Then I heard...

Intruder [x4]
Alert [x4]

Depression in his soul
Poverty in his pocket.
He tries a robbery to stop it
He needs shoes like a hobbit.
Once was the Lord of Bling
But spent it all on his fix.
Now the only bracelet he owns
Are the scars on his wrist.
Let's go to the bar he'd insist
And drink away all our sorrow.
But his friends never joined him
They gotta be at work tomorrow.
But who knows if it's even comin
He doesn't even want it.
Cuz he knows it'll bring more stress
More reasons to get blunted.
Then he heard....

Intruder [x4]
Alert [x4]

Any Thoughts?

thats real good. think i can help u out and rap that out. ill put it on youtube